Dear Children, listen to the podcast below and complete your task on story planning:
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The teacher and the big alugeter WHERE the story take plase, In the classroom. what expcting hapen, The ilugeter eat all the book and boxs. The ening of the story,There was a magic taecher,the teacher turn the ilugeter into ateach.
Once upon a time in a cooking class there was a cooking teacher named Sophie and some children. The cooking teacher was one day making one recepie and she tasted it so the children could learn it properly, but she turned into a lion on eating it. She started breaking everything. There was one p.e. sir, he knew magic , he made her swim in one magic river and she turned back into the teacher again.
once upon a time a magic boy come to class 2/3 he see class decoration. he turn his self into a monkey. but he was sad because he turned his self to a monkey but class 2/3 say we going to help you.
story title:Class 1 and the beanstack.Where does the story take place?Playground.Who is in the story?Mr.Knight Ryan Neel.What unexpected thing happens?Mr.Knight turnes into a bean stalk.How does your story end?The boy takes Mr.Knight to sir then the turns him back into his normelform.
Superb Ryan, You have included all the success criteria for a story plan. Now your next step will be to write a complete story by developing each section of your story plan.Remember to include some sound words of your own and dialogues with speech marks. Ms Nikhat
Well tried Bavely, sweetheart in this task I want you to write a story plan only. Listen to the podcast again and try to write a story plan, as Ryan has done.We wil develop this story plan into story in the next task with different success criteria. Ms Nikhat
Once upon a time in the far ocean there was a giant crab ,he had no friends .One day he found a strange key and a big box he opened the box with the key he found another giant crab when he came out they became friends for ever. Omar
Where my story take place? Class 4/5 Who is in the story? The teacher and a dragon, What expected thing happened? That the teacher get stuck into a dragon Bavely Hany
Tittle: class five and the parrot Once upon a time there lived a teacher named Mr.Rich. He had a big mostach. He is rich. He is good.One day he was teaching them about parrots in the class. Suddenly there was a flish...a wlish ...and a bash... and a there was a big parrot. The children were scarred but they did not run."Wait... we can wish our teacher was back." said May. They did it right away. Then the parrott was turuned in to Mr.Rich. Fatima.
Class two and the duck There was a teacher called miss Shweta,she was a kind teacher.In the class she was reading a book about ducks.And she wished that she could be a duck.,so there was a bang ......and a fize...........a splash.......And miss shweta tride to read the book she could only quack.And the children wished that there Miss was back.'So there was a bang and a fize .......a splash.....And there Miss was back. Nabiha
Title of the story the teacher and the dragon wher dose it take place in the swimming pool who is in the story dragon ,teacher ,children .what unexpected thing happen? a dragon came he took the boy .the end the teacher helped the boy. Leen chaiekh
The title is "little red riding hod".The story taks place in the forest .The characters are red riding hod, mum, wod cater, granmother and fox . The anxpecting thing hapend that the fox looked like the grandmother .At end the fox died and the grandmother cam rout of his mout .The end . Nou
Where is the story take place? In the far ocean. When?long time age. Characters.giant crab. Problem . No friends for the crab and he found strange key . The end .Nom he has a friend likes him.
once upon a time in class 2/4 the teacher said "we will learn about animals ",then the teacher read a story about animals. The teacher wished to be an animal that called a tiger,then the teacher became a tiger, then the tiger made a big mess. The class children went to a teacher can make magic, then he made some magic ,then she returned back to the class herself.Omar Ibrahim.
The Teacher and the Magical Squirrel The children in Grade 2/1 were very happy today. It was story time of the week. The teacher Ms Nikhat took them to the garden to read a story of a Magical Squirrel The moment Ms Nikhat opened the book there was smoke and she turned into a Squirrel, the book had a spell that anyone who opens the book will turn into the Magical Squirrel. The children were scared as the teacher had turned into a squirrel; she stared eating the grass in the garden, then the books, children’s lunch boxes and started climbing on the trees and jumping on the children. The children started running in the garden and tried to call some other teachers for help It was hard for the other teachers to believe the children as they could not find both the Squirrel and Ms Nikhat in the garden One bright child Samaira went and closed the story book which Ms Nikhat has opened and was lying on the ground, again there was smoke everywhere and Ms Nikhat returned All the children were very happy and hugged Ms Nikhat and praised Samaira for closing the book. Ms Beth and Ms Nikhat both were very happy with Samaira and gave her the star of the week.
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The teacher and the big alugeter
WHERE the story take plase,
In the classroom. what expcting hapen, The ilugeter eat all the book and boxs. The ening of the story,There was a magic taecher,the teacher turn the ilugeter into ateach.
sanudi
Were MyStorys plaes is swiming pool
HoW Taecher and children
Weta The taecher turn to a big fish
End Another taecher turn bake safly.
class tow and the very big fish.
Elfa Ata
Class four and the scary lion.
Once upon a time in a cooking class there was a cooking teacher named Sophie and some children. The cooking teacher was one day making one recepie and she tasted it so the children could learn it properly, but she turned into a lion on eating it. She started breaking everything. There was one p.e. sir, he knew magic , he made her swim in one magic river and she turned back into the teacher again.
class 2/3 and the magic boy
once upon a time a magic boy come to class 2/3 he see class decoration.
he turn his self into a monkey.
but he was sad because he turned his self to a monkey but class 2/3 say we going to help you.
bavely hany
I can't open the podcast.How can I open it. Omar Ibrahim.
How can I open The podcast? Thank you. Omar Ibrahim.
story title:Class 1 and the beanstack.Where does the story take
place?Playground.Who is in the story?Mr.Knight Ryan Neel.What unexpected thing happens?Mr.Knight turnes into a bean stalk.How does your story end?The boy takes Mr.Knight to sir then the turns him back into his normelform.
Superb Ryan,
You have included all the success criteria for a story plan. Now your next step will be to write a complete story by developing each section of your story plan.Remember to include some sound words of your own and dialogues with speech marks.
Ms Nikhat
Omar just click one arrow tab on the podcast and wait for few minutes to get loaded.
Ms Nikhat
Well tried Bavely, sweetheart in this task I want you to write a story plan only. Listen to the podcast again and try to write a story plan, as Ryan has done.We wil develop this story plan into story in the next task with different success criteria.
Ms Nikhat
Well done Elfa and Sanudi,
You have met the success criteria ( that means you have included all the five points for making a successful story plan).
Ms Nikhat
Once upon a time in the far ocean there was a giant crab ,he had no friends .One day he found a strange key and a big box he opened the box with the key he found another giant crab when he came out they became friends for ever. Omar
Where my story take place? Class 4/5
Who is in the story? The teacher and a dragon,
What expected thing happened? That the teacher get stuck into a dragon
Bavely Hany
Tittle: class five and the parrot
Once upon a time there lived a teacher named Mr.Rich. He had a big mostach. He is rich. He is good.One day he was teaching them about parrots in the class. Suddenly there was a flish...a wlish ...and a bash... and a there was a big parrot. The children were scarred but they did not run."Wait... we can wish our teacher was back." said May. They did it right away. Then the parrott was turuned in to Mr.Rich. Fatima.
Class two and the duck
There was a teacher called miss Shweta,she was a kind teacher.In the class she was reading a book about ducks.And she wished that she could be a duck.,so there was a bang ......and a fize...........a splash.......And miss shweta tride to read the book she could only quack.And the children wished that there Miss was back.'So there was a bang and a fize .......a splash.....And there Miss was back.
Nabiha
Title of the story the teacher and the dragon wher dose it take place in the swimming pool who is in the story dragon ,teacher ,children .what unexpected thing happen? a dragon came he took the boy .the end the teacher helped the boy. Leen chaiekh
I loved fatima story ,it was nice but she forgot to write where does it take place from Leen chaiekh
The title is "little red riding hod".The story taks place in the forest .The characters are red riding hod, mum, wod cater, granmother and fox . The anxpecting thing hapend that the fox looked like the grandmother .At end the fox died and the grandmother cam rout of his mout .The end . Nou
My story title is ( The giant crab and the strange key). Omar.
Where is the story take place? In the far ocean. When?long time age. Characters.giant crab. Problem . No friends for the crab and he found strange key . The end .Nom he has a friend likes him.
by.laiba rehan
the title of the stroy.
miss labora and the teachers.
good ryan best one
The tiger and class 2/4
once upon a time in class 2/4 the teacher said "we will learn about animals ",then the teacher read a story about animals. The teacher wished to be an animal that called a tiger,then the teacher became a tiger, then the tiger made a big mess. The class children went to a teacher can make magic, then he made some magic ,then she returned back to the class herself.Omar Ibrahim.
The Teacher and the Magical Squirrel
The children in Grade 2/1 were very happy today. It was story time of the week.
The teacher Ms Nikhat took them to the garden to read a story of a Magical Squirrel
The moment Ms Nikhat opened the book there was smoke and she turned into a Squirrel, the book had a spell that anyone who opens the book will turn into the Magical Squirrel.
The children were scared as the teacher had turned into a squirrel; she stared eating the grass in the garden, then the books, children’s lunch boxes and started climbing on the trees and jumping on the children.
The children started running in the garden and tried to call some other teachers for help
It was hard for the other teachers to believe the children as they could not find both the Squirrel and Ms Nikhat in the garden
One bright child Samaira went and closed the story book which Ms Nikhat has opened and was lying on the ground, again there was smoke everywhere and Ms Nikhat returned
All the children were very happy and hugged Ms Nikhat and praised Samaira for closing the book.
Ms Beth and Ms Nikhat both were very happy with Samaira and gave her the star of the week.
Samaira Nasta
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