Dear Children, Its' time to assess your classmates work done in story plan task.Choose any child's work from "Story Plan Task Comment" and give your feedback on the success criteria given for story Podcast.Follow the example given.
My Feedback for Bavely (9th October 2012): Bravo Bavely, your story plan has much improved 2nd time.You have included setting, characters and the problem also.Please remember to include how does your story end and the tittle. Nikhat
The magic teacher by Mohamed Atif There was a teacher who can change in the class into a monkey. One day she became a monkey. All the chidren laugh loudly at the monkey.They did not study, so teacher returned back into a human. The children returned to study.
13 comments:
My Feedback for Bavely (9th October 2012):
Bravo Bavely, your story plan has much improved 2nd time.You have included setting, characters and the problem also.Please remember to include how does your story end and the tittle.
Nikhat
MY feed back to omar(october8)Omar you did not put the tittle and I can't uderstand the letters and you are not making a story plan tusk.
sanudi
Well done Leen.I love your story.You have included your story perfectly.That means you have done five points .Fatima
Well done Fatima and Sanudi for giving feedback on your buddies work.
Ms Nikhat
My feed back for Sanudi(october7) .Good story but I can't under stand some words may be wrong like alligator .Omar
Hello Ms Nikhat please tell Omar about the story plan tusk again.
Bavly, you have not write the title . Leen, you have done all good .Nour
My Feedback to Sanudi.
Where is your title of the story Sanudi.
Your work pretty well but it is a good try.
From Ryan
my feedback about elfa story you forget to write the name of the story and write the main charcter next time you have to write clear
bavely
Wow Fatima your story is realy
interesting.
From Nabiha to Fatima.
intresting
The magic teacher
by Mohamed Atif
There was a teacher who can change in the class into a monkey. One day she became a monkey. All the chidren laugh loudly at the monkey.They did not study, so teacher returned back into a human.
The children returned to study.
My feedback is for Leen
I liked her story and comments
Samaira Nasta
I give feed bake to zeina well done zeina you was good at planing a story i love what you was writing a story plan.
ELFA AMJAD TO ZEINA.
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